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Beta Read Your Fantasy Novel

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10 per unit - Virtual OK - Posted Jun 09, 2018

I will give you feedback on your fantasy novel via Google Docs.

I will read through your manuscript once and give an overall comment on how I feel the story flows, its strengths and weaknesses, characterisation, plot, and any other things you'd like my opinion on. Then I will do a second pass and give more targeted feedback in specific sections, as well as noting and correcting any typos, spell errors, repetition and other grammatical errors that I find.

If your story has not yet been read by anyone else, please let me know so I can tailor my feedback to it more effectively. I am not squeamish about mature content but I am likely to be more critical of books containing rape and/or excessively sexist tropes. I prefer progressive fantasy over 'stereotypical' fantasy - all-male casts are fine as long as they're not furthering negative stereotypes about men.

Training & Qualifications


I hav been reading fantasy novels since childhood and reviewing fantasy novels for just under a year now. I am most familiar with epic fantasy, medieval fantasy, urban fantasy and flintlock fantasy.

Availability & Preferences


Weekdays between 8am and 5pm GMT+1, occasionally on weekends as well.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Eleanor


Susan received unit of Italian Translation from Eleanor
Jul 03, 2018
Eleanor is absolutely professional and incredibly fast. I will definitely work with her again.
Nate provided Help with Beta Read My Fantasy Novel for Eleanor
Jun 26, 2018
A talented writer and a welcome addition to our writer group online. I thoroughly enjoyed Eleanor's writing from beginning to end. I am glad I had the... opportunity to work with her.show more
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Jun 18, 2018
Eleanor is amazing. She makes juice in a very interesting way. So neat! Enjoy!
Joseph provided Help with Beta Read My Fantasy Novel for Eleanor
Jun 13, 2018
Eleanor is very delightful to work with! Would recommend her for her friendliness and quick response time!

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Beta Read My Fantasy Novel
I'm looking for a fantasy reader with a critical eye and a progressive mindset to help me troubleshoot my story. The main areas I'm looking for feedback on include... *pacing - does the story mo...

I'm looking for exposure for my paintings and novels, and I'm excited to provide any services I can to contribute to the community. I look forward to helping and being helpful on Simbi.

About Eleanor Wallis

I am a 27-year-old fantasy illustrator and writer born in Australia, raised in Italy and living in Denmark. I garden, read and crochet in my spare time. I make my own oils for oil burners and I ma...ke candles with those oils. I enjoy walking in the forests near my house and photographing the numerous Danish bogs (while not getting too close, of course - Bogman, anyone?). The Danish landscape provides a lot of inspiration for my stories and art, though unfortunately it is quite flat here so there aren't many rivers or mountains. I live with my spouse and our daughter about an hour's train ride from Copenhagen. She is already fluent in Danish, while us two adults struggle to make even basic sentences for now, but we're learning, slowly. We moved to Europe as my spouse is a Lead Games Engineer and prospects are slim in Australia, though the industry is growing. show more

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