I will offer you constructive feedback on plot, characters, narrative strength, metaphor and allegory, and diction. I will also help proofread and edit (if necessary), and offer my own insight into improvements that could be made in the broader strokes. I will tailor my service to your needs, if you specify, or I can focus on the things that I think are most in need of adjustment or improvement.
My feedback will be honest, potentially uncomfortably so, but I will do my best to ensure that it adheres to your vision for the work, and that the improvements made are ones that you can not only live with, but adore!